Bukit Siguntang
Bukit siguntang is historical place in palembang.It is located around 3 km from benteng kuto besak or in bukit lama.There are many histories that we can know from bukit siguntang.It's a place where the lords are burried.There are archeological relics,such as epigraph,status,and the king tomb also.Bukit siguntang is the highest hill in palembang.It is around 27 m above sea level.
In 1920, Buddha status was found in bukit siguntang but these discovered only in pieces,first it was found buddha statue's head,two months later the archeologist found buddha statue's body but the last, the archeologist didn't find the foot and it was still missing.Today, we can see buddha statue in Sultan Mahmud badarudin museum.
Bukit siguntang has become a kingdom that was conducted by king parameswara. In bukit siguntang,there are 8 king tombs, such as king sigentar alam tomb,commander bagus kuning and putri kembang dadar .
There are many visitors visit bukit siguntang for visiting king tomb and also they learn the history of bukit siguntang .
Bukit siguntang is a nice place,There are many trees and this place is very wide,although it has many mysteries
1. I think you should use capital letter for the name of place or sites such as:
BalasHapusBenteng Kuto Besak, Palembang,Bukit Siguntang,Bukit lama,Tomb of King Sigentar Alam, Commander Bagus Kuning, & Putri Kembang Dadar.
2. I have another opinion abt the 2nd sentence==>There are many histories that we can get from Bukit Siguntang
3. Wrong typing in a word status(4th sentence)--It must be statues
the word "King Parameswara" also have to use capital letter,,
HapusYes Mega.
BalasHapusRight Tyas
Can you tell me the relation between buddha and bukit siguntang? Because it's not clear enough. Thank you :)
BalasHapusI think all of this, its good. 😅
BalasHapusYes, I agree about opinion tyas
BalasHapusIt must statues not statue.
And you must use capital letter the name of places.
Archeologist not archeologist you must use capital letter in the first letter. Thanks sist.
there is no picture and not use capitalize word " Buddha status was found in (bukit siguntang) but these discovered only in pieces
BalasHapusthanks you
Ya thanks guys for your suggestions, I will improve it . Ya mbak fit ,I type it on my phone,So I don't know how to take it from my gallery but I've already taken it in the internet.For nidya there's a relation,Buddha is a king of buddism so It was discovered in Bukit Siguntang .So it was worth discovered for Sriwijaya Kingdom .I think that's the relation .Thanksssssss buddies :D
BalasHapusI see, thanks!
HapusWell, everyone has given a good comments.
BalasHapusGo ahead Mega, you've done well. You just need to do some revision, especially for the paragraphs, some of them are too short (4 & 5)
One more thing, it's gonna be more interesting if you added its picture...
Overall, you're a good blogger...
Thanks ..
BalasHapus